Reviews for If Only
ashes and rose petals chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Wow...that was incredible. I love it. Thank you so much for giving me something so beautiful to treasure.
toodledOO chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
hey, my name is amber and im 15, and i love all your work! you are a very talented poet, and have a great taste in music. im trying my best to get better at writing so that someday i might have as many so well-loved poems on FictionPress as you! thx for inspiring me,

amber
like a lover chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
*mouth hangs open* i'm surprised i only found this poem now! this was amazing! crap! i'm in awe! beautiful, beautiful work. i really, really liked the ending. you rule so hard. i am so faving this. _
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
If only those of gentle hearts weren't blinded by pain. If only they didn't hurt others when burned by pain. If only...*feels heart breaking* Such bitterness, such saddness, such pain...
"If only if only the woodpecker sighs
the bark on the trees is as soft as the skies. The wolf waits below hungry and lonely. He cries to the moon...
if only..if only"-From the movie Holes
Hawke
Hail the Warrior chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
If only... I love this poem. It's just makes this world seem like it could get better but good ol Murphy...
HtW
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Ah, if only...
Wow, this is beautiful! I love these lines:
"Trees just like those that are today
Only all the people's would see their beauty this way"
It's so true, no one sees how beautiful things are. Most don't see the trees at all...
Keep Writing
And thank you for your reviews!
Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Wonderful... I love the line "I cry a little inside and die a little inside"
It's beautiful.
Karasu
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
This one was absolutley amazing! I loved all the comparisons you made, I don't even know which one is my fave. One thing's for sure, this poem is going on my faves list! Great job! :)
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
A little kind of unrealistic- ppl would always be mean (so i think) but u really do have good poetic skills. i love the last verse.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
damn, now thats different! wow! its really good too! i like it! ;)
bach-player chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
some interesting imagery here...
No more red and white puckered fingerprints of Violence upon the skin
and
Then the knuckles of Reality crack
And I am sent spinning back
ended effectively w/ repetition...