| Reviews for CRDP: Beginnings |
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   technodragon78 chapter 3 . 5/24/2004 I LOVE your writing. Its the best. Need more Adir and Mercer. Update update. Pleasee. |
| Sheepie chapter 2 . 5/10/2004 Wow... LOVE IT! update soon! -begs- pwease! -bounces around- MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! . GREAT JOB! |
| Neechi chapter 2 . 5/9/2004 'd~b' So cute! |
| Sasha L. Miller chapter 2 . 5/7/2004 great chapter! did i review the first one? i...don't think so... anyways... i like your writing lots, but you have a _lot_ of typos... it's disconcerting... like with the venerence/vulnerable thing that i saw. it totally threw me off track. also the know/now thing. but i do like your stories much, and aside from the typos, i am very much impressed with your work. can't wait to see more! update soon please |
| Sheepie chapter 1 . 5/2/2004 wow this is really good so far. I love the charas, specially Adir! Mercer is really kewl to! I love the names! How do you come up with such kewl names! . update ALL stories soon! |
| DiamondKing chapter 1 . 5/1/2004 Nice story. Countinue _! |
| technodragon78 chapter 1 . 4/29/2004 Write, more. Write more. PLeasee... |
| sushi-chan chapter 1 . 4/29/2004 Wow! I just really loved this! Gah! I can't wait for the next chapter! You must update soon! I want to know what Adir looks like! |