Reviews for CRDP: Beginnings
technodragon78 chapter 3 . 5/24/2004
I LOVE your writing. Its the best. Need more Adir and Mercer. Update update. Pleasee.
Sheepie chapter 2 . 5/10/2004
Wow... LOVE IT! update soon! -begs- pwease! -bounces around- MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! . GREAT JOB!
Neechi chapter 2 . 5/9/2004
'd~b' So cute!
Sasha L. Miller chapter 2 . 5/7/2004
great chapter! did i review the first one? i...don't think so... anyways... i like your writing lots, but you have a _lot_ of typos... it's disconcerting... like with the venerence/vulnerable thing that i saw. it totally threw me off track. also the know/now thing. but i do like your stories much, and aside from the typos, i am very much impressed with your work. can't wait to see more! update soon please
Sheepie chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
wow this is really good so far. I love the charas, specially Adir! Mercer is really kewl to! I love the names! How do you come up with such kewl names! . update ALL stories soon!
DiamondKing chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Nice story. Countinue _!
technodragon78 chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
Write, more. Write more. PLeasee...
sushi-chan chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
Wow! I just really loved this! Gah! I can't wait for the next chapter! You must update soon! I want to know what Adir looks like!
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