Adding! TTFN! ;)

Awesome story! i really enjoyed the characters.

I'm interested to see what happens next...so I shall proceed onward to the next chapter.

It's good so far! _

I really love this story.U really have was great reading it.

Very cool. I love Adir! He's my favorite!

okay, so mercer is officially an asshole. and i just *love* how everyone thinks that adir is a freak and no one cares about his feelings. fantastic.

Oh my God! NAMBLA would love this story!

I know you know what I'm going to say about Shen, so I'm not going to say it. Instead, I'll look sit here, enjoying the overall aspects of the story, and imaginging him slightly less uber-uke and anorexic than he is described.

See, I told you I'd get around to read this.

Btw - last chapter it seemed that baby and kitten got used quite early, almost out of place. Not sure that Mercer appears to be the type of character that would use baby/kitten. Very similar to other character's words in other fics.

p.s. “Fine,” Adir said dropping gracefully to the floor. “I will take Jack, if he upsets me I will just blow up his head.” made me laugh.

"Adir shifted slightly clinching his teeth when Mercer touched his hard member unintentionally."

Yes. you find that happens alot. damn this confusing anatomy - it's so easy not to notice things...

In parts it seems unrealistic, but on the whole it's pretty good. The 'I love you part' seemed quite soon though.

I like the take on this you've done. Almost x-men ish, or at least it reminds me of it. One point: it didn't seem like 2 months had past (I only noticed that because it's in the speach somewhere). It sounds more like a week or 5 days-ish.

The only bright point of having flu, and now pnuemonia is the luxory of lying about and reading all your fics! I loved this series a lot, the plot is really good and I love the charicters and the inventive powers and situations you come up with. I got so caught up in it I read straight through from one on...and it just held my interest all the way through. You are really a good and inventive writer, I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

This is so cute! I really like the way the characters interact with each other. Adir's my favorite, but I'm interested to see how Gun and Archer's relationship turns out!

ooh heather i luved it !