Reviews for CRDP: Beginnings
Storm December chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
Adding! TTFN! ;)
Angel Magic chapter 12 . 4/13/2006
Awesome story! i really enjoyed the characters.
Aidan Montague chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
I'm interested to see what happens I shall proceed onward to the next chapter.

It's good so far! _
darrena chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
I really love this story.U really have was great reading it.
Nickel Xenon chapter 12 . 11/3/2005
Very cool. I love Adir! He's my favorite!
preg scholar chapter 5 . 9/21/2005
okay, so mercer is officially an asshole. and i just *love* how everyone thinks that adir is a freak and no one cares about his feelings. fantastic.
d'Neronique chapter 3 . 4/23/2005
Oh my God! NAMBLA would love this story!
d'Neronique chapter 2 . 4/23/2005
I know you know what I'm going to say about Shen, so I'm not going to say it. Instead, I'll look sit here, enjoying the overall aspects of the story, and imaginging him slightly less uber-uke and anorexic than he is described.

See, I told you I'd get around to read this.
pneumothorax chapter 5 . 4/8/2005
Btw - last chapter it seemed that baby and kitten got used quite early, almost out of place. Not sure that Mercer appears to be the type of character that would use baby/kitten. Very similar to other character's words in other fics.

p.s. “Fine,” Adir said dropping gracefully to the floor. “I will take Jack, if he upsets me I will just blow up his head.” made me laugh.
pneumothorax chapter 4 . 4/8/2005
"Adir shifted slightly clinching his teeth when Mercer touched his hard member unintentionally."

Yes. you find that happens alot. damn this confusing anatomy - it's so easy not to notice things...
pneumothorax chapter 3 . 4/8/2005
In parts it seems unrealistic, but on the whole it's pretty good. The 'I love you part' seemed quite soon though.
pneumothorax chapter 2 . 4/8/2005
I like the take on this you've done. Almost x-men ish, or at least it reminds me of it. One point: it didn't seem like 2 months had past (I only noticed that because it's in the speach somewhere). It sounds more like a week or 5 days-ish.
sb1 chapter 12 . 12/28/2004
The only bright point of having flu, and now pnuemonia is the luxory of lying about and reading all your fics! I loved this series a lot, the plot is really good and I love the charicters and the inventive powers and situations you come up with. I got so caught up in it I read straight through from one on...and it just held my interest all the way through. You are really a good and inventive writer, I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Dream Fox chapter 12 . 11/21/2004
This is so cute! I really like the way the characters interact with each other. Adir's my favorite, but I'm interested to see how Gun and Archer's relationship turns out!
J.D. California chapter 12 . 10/25/2004
ooh heather i luved it !
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