Reviews for Welcome to My Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very sweet and loving |
![]() ![]() I love the story so far but I would recommend you invest in a Beta. It's obvious that grammar isn't your strong suit. Nevertheless, I am indeed enjoying your story. ~Fatty |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you have more storys about the people from this "world" couse its lovely and i love reading about it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved reading about Drake's insecurities, fears, and assumptions! He was a great character with a unique personality that I couldn't get enough of. Not to mention all his 'Cur' insults. I got a huge laugh out of those and still do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this couple- so adorable. Perfect Story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, what a sweet story! I really loved it, and I couldn't stop reading until I finished it! Just one thing; you should really put some sort of break in between POV and scene changes. It got really confusing in some places. But that hardly mattered, since it was so fun to read. ] |
![]() ![]() did i miss something? he does dye his hair back right? . otherwise, this story kept me from homework for three hours. it was amazing, thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally i finished reading i think the 5th story of yours...i love your story! i love it so much! i finally finished reading this and i realize that i love all your writings..they are so damn good...! and you make a connection to Finding Heaven..i love how you do that ..but make me sad as i never did finish reading Finding Heaven..but still i love it! i love in the beginning of the story hoe Drake being cold and using voices for his insecurities as it normal for people to do that..and Jason character has a slight a knight in shining amour to his personality with his being Drake protector or some sort..and i notice that in your story that you tend to focus on the main character meaning you never drabble to other people, and for me i like it..as i tend to read story that focusing on the main love life than other people around them..call me picky or whatever but its just make it more confusing to read on other characters...just one question,is this the end of the coupling?... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sensei this was wonderful, I love your cross-overs! |
![]() ![]() did you know that in the title of your first chapter it says welcome to my live instead of welcome to my life? I haven't gotten much further... But i will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() super sexy story! love ya heather ]. so i wonder if this reveiw will get in touch with you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a cute story _ I had fun reading it. My only suggestions are to go through and fix some spelling and grammar errors, and maybe add a bit more detail to certain parts. But overall, a good read _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Destin's adorable _ This was a nice light chapter :P Yay! Drake managed to cook something! |