Reviews for Out of the Fire
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
i really like that, i like all of your poetry actulli. *smiles*
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Reminds me of a phoenix. Good job.
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Wow. Interesting poem. I especially like the comparison of flame to water in the second stanza and the thought that ideas are unaware and unconscious.
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Hey thnx 4 the review... I like the one word lines in the first and second stanza... Great, it rhymes! I love rhyming poems The last line is a nice closing, and the description of the fire was so beautiful and clear... nicely done, write on!
Happy-Platipus chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
I really like it!
It is kinda freaky...
Its like we aren't really in control of our minds...
Maybe we have been abducted by aliens?
You used great words, and it flows really well!
The last line, of coure, is rather awesome.
Post more things! Please! This is really GOOD!
kijochan chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
The notion of fire being something where an idea could spring forth from really intrigues me. It's almost like an enigma, but the whole beauty of it is how it's been done. Here you portrayed a raging fire as a pure and cleansing source of positive energy. Good luck in all your work!
nine iron chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
nice concept, rebirth sort of, dont know if that was what you were going for. It reads well and there are some great lines and words in there. Well done on getting the idea over.
Good luck in all your work
Nine Iron