Reviews for Frost Maiden
Fumiko Ishihala chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
I'm agreeing with the prev. comment. It has a nice story line but I think the thing it lacks is detail, depth, and a meter. Your poem needs more of a rhythm which always makes a poem good.
Mair chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
This has good imagery, but it lacks something. It doesn't provoke any thought or emotion. It's also a little confusing. Keep writing.