Reviews for Eating the Shortcake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey, really like your story, but i'm confused..is that the end, cause it seems like she chose Kenny over Dex, which is alright and everything, but your conclusion isn't very clear, so update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool so far, has some issues, but whatever. Now I'm thirsty, man! My hands are cold... Br! . ; O_O |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, it's so well written. Witty and funny and not to mention dramatic and romantic. I'm rotting for a Sammi and Dexter over here: I think Kenny is more like a brother. But hey, I'm sure whatever you decide to do will be great. Update ASAP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aleluia! finally man! haha.. kawawa naman si dexter...oh well...its really kenny talaga! haha i just realized he is such a schizo...like you!ahahaha! update more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHH! It's fabulicious MORE MORE mORE xoxox ta'z luv My favourite character would be Dex! COME BACK DEX! *chases character with rope hidden behinid back. I promise I won't kidnap you aggain!* xoxox |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT Your style of writing is different, that's why i like it. :D xoxox ta'z luv |
![]() ![]() ![]() To the author: i suggest that sammi go for the blue team because it's obviously the better team! Wait, It should've been maroon team ; ) hahaha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT MORE PLEASE MORE MORE MORE AYHA! It's one thirty in the morning... mwahaha I LOVE IT xoxox ta'z luv |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I just wanted to say for this chapter, before i read on and forget, that you messed up the first person second person thing. You kept on switching. xoxox ta'z luv IT's LOVELY SO FAR HTOUGH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All i can say is that daxter and Sammi should be together! (*Kill Kenny) haha, kidding... Well, I'm looking forward to seeing how the next chap goes...upload fast! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hayayayay..i dont like this chapter...period...but i love the chap prior this one...this ruins everything but still...i will support and continue to read this story even though it hurts...ehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! Kenny ruins everything! Dex and Sammi we're already getting close... ohwellz... looking forward to read the next chap! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() you missed the word know in between steven's sentence. :) Talking in bursts? so you... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... Dex is so nice! . That makes sammi all the more not so nice. Kidding. I'm rooting for Sammi and Dex and since Kenny slept with Chui then maybe sammi and kenny will no longer happen... i doubt that. |