Reviews for Broken Shards
Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 3/1
Fast paced poem. Pain aplenty here and expressive of that pain. "Darkened fears" and "bloodied tears" I like best in this entire poem. Brings to mind a cycle of fear and blood, fear and blood, and repeat until healing of some sort. These two lines are the entire poem I think. Good written (I'm tired so sorry about mistakes).
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
I know the feeling, hopefully you'll find the answer that's right for you. This was a good piece, it reminded me how far I've come from the heartbreak. Goodness on paper.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
ah.. oh... opefullyt hings clear up for you.
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Good rhyme here, not bad at stuff, the subject has alot to convey and it is done so well you are biased to their opinions.
Congrats on a good work
Nine Iron
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
Such a sad poem. I conveyed the feelings amazingly. I hope you get through this tough time. Great poem!
ebonyheart chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
good work. last line finishes it off nicely.
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
Another spectacular poem from one of my personal favorite poets of Fictionpress. Very good, and I truly know how you felt - well done.