Reviews for Against the Darkened Sea
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
i honestly love this poem. even the slightest action can greatly effect someones life in imeasurable ways.
Aishestel chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
Beautiful... Absolutely beautiful...
I wish I could believe this though...
You really have a way with words..
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
very nice. it could be stronger though, I think
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Great message the line about not hiding from your destiny. I love the message here, influence on paper. :D
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
yet again, good
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Great title, really captured me in to reading it. It is so well written, holding off the title to the last line really builds up the anticipation. The second and last two lines are the best. Another really good poem.
Nine Iron