|Reviews for Sonnet 1 The Dance|
| BlackLilyArcher chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
T_T such a sad poem...T_T
keep writing _
i luv ur writings
| Asagao chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Good, you've got the Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme... meter leaves a bit to be lacking but it still w orks quite well. _ Fascinating message. Very poignant.