hay its was really... deep... but good non-the-less... keep writing...

wow this is really good. it gives a new perception...a new pov...and that's rare and that takes a lot of bravery...and a lot of talent to make a new more controversial pov understandable to the reader. i hope you write more, this is really good. seriously. i want to know more!
anyways, i just wanted to say that you completely caught me off gaurd and i don't get that as much as i'd like. so i'm thanking you. you make people think, and that's what really good writers do. not only that, you make them feel.