Reviews for Disposable Heros
The Crazy Talk Kid chapter 3 . 1/10/2008
I like this story too, interesting, albeit heartless, concept. I have a question though, how are these warriors going to fight if they don't have any weapons? Kdh
Kevin Noonan chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
I am very intriged by this story. Keep it up. Would you please read and review some of my stories?
Calvin Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Okay not a bad premise judging by your summary but this story definatly needs a little work. First of all the grammer is troubling, a lot of stupid, easy to fix mistakes are in this document and they distract from the flow of the story. The dialogue isn't bad but half the time I can't distinguish between the two characters because they are speaking in the same 'voice'. As for the plot you might want to add a twist to the alien invasion, its kind of overdone.
Calvin Fitzgerald