| Reviews for Pure Sin |
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   Hamlet Survives chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 whoa, good one. it really shows that its wats on the inside that matters |
| Baobei.13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007 So true. Its sad that this happens daily. This poem is beautiful like the girl. |
| CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 5/27/2005 powerful poem...definitely... Got the point across very well. |
| loversdream17 chapter 1 . 4/17/2005 wow! is all i can see one of your best. Keep up the good work love your Always And Forever Mandi |
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004 You have an amazing amount of reviews on this. You're deserving of them |
| Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 12/1/2004 Aww...wow..this is so sad. |
| LillySananger chapter 1 . 11/2/2004 This is well done. I quite liked it. THe inconsistency in the rhyme scheme made it interesting to read. I love it. |
| Elbereth141 chapter 1 . 10/4/2004 Woa. Deep. Really, really deep. How do you WRITE stuff like that? its fantastic! a great finish, and i especially liked the metaphore of the black weed amoung the roses. but roses have thorns... lots of thorns. Cool! _ also, about what you said, yea my idea came from "timeline". well spotted. |
| ShorelineWind chapter 1 . 7/24/2004 Sad... I almost cried when I read it. Very moving. Very touching. I love this poem. Keep writing, ShorelineWind |
| Ericalyn chapter 1 . 7/23/2004 This is really touching, but really true. Keep up the great work. I love how you ended it! |
| dramamonkey chapter 1 . 7/13/2004 this is so true, because a lot of people go through this and feel like they have to match up to what is in the magizines and writing! |
| INTP chapter 1 . 6/30/2004 There's a great message in this poem; I like the comparison of "the black weed in a field of roses". |
| Turena chapter 1 . 6/26/2004 I really like this its so well writen, |
| zeegurl29 chapter 1 . 6/8/2004 thats really good. it reminds me of when i was in middle school all the kids picked on this one girl and stuff... but i was her friend. she didn't mind though at least i think she didn't. were still friends today. |
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 5/21/2004 Very Very strong last line... loved it. Keep writing! |