Reviews for Pure Sin
Hamlet Survives chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
whoa, good one. it really shows that its wats on the inside that matters
Baobei.13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
So true. Its sad that this happens daily. This poem is beautiful like the girl.
CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
powerful poem...definitely...

Got the point across very well.
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
wow! is all i can see one of your best. Keep up the good work love your Always And Forever Mandi
Anna178 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
You have an amazing amount of reviews on this. You're deserving of them
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 12/1/2004 is so sad.
LillySananger chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
This is well done. I quite liked it. THe inconsistency in the rhyme scheme made it interesting to read. I love it.
Elbereth141 chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Woa. Deep. Really, really deep. How do you WRITE stuff like that? its fantastic! a great finish, and i especially liked the metaphore of the black weed amoung the roses. but roses have thorns... lots of thorns. Cool! _
also, about what you said, yea my idea came from "timeline". well spotted.
ShorelineWind chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
I almost cried when I read it. Very moving. Very touching.
I love this poem.
Keep writing,
Ericalyn chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
This is really touching, but really true. Keep up the great work. I love how you ended it!
dramamonkey chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
this is so true, because a lot of people go through this and feel like they have to match up to what is in the magizines and writing!
INTP chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
There's a great message in this poem; I like the comparison of "the black weed in a field of roses".
Turena chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
I really like this its so well writen,
zeegurl29 chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
thats really good. it reminds me of when i was in middle school all the kids picked on this one girl and stuff... but i was her friend. she didn't mind though at least i think she didn't. were still friends today.
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Very Very strong last line... loved it. Keep writing!
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