Reviews for Pure Sin
LaTierraSutil chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
that truly is deep, yet terribly sad.
- -tear.- -
and the saddest part... it actually DOES happen.
- -tear.- -
great poem.
beautifully written.
Arreis Kurai chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
i love it! its written beautifully and i love the last line
~*Arreis Kurai*~
the weeping willow chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
This is an extremely moving piece, and all too true. The rhyming doesn't seem forced, which is good. _ My favorite line is "She was the black weed in a field of red roses" (it especially reminds me of myself).
Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
This is so sad, painful, and, unfortunatly, very true. Poems like this hit so close to home... its a powerful piece.
~ CoolBeans18s
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Yes, yes she was. Excellent job of putting into words that which our society needs to hear. If only more people could see the truth of this poem. Truly a great poem, with an excellent message expressed very well.
SilverFlowersInHerHair chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
oh like cryin' here!Great job!I know what you mean...very well written...Love you name: Prince Of Mirkwood. I am also a Rings fan.:)
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Once again, very sad, painfully sad. You've brought out such a dark truth so masterfully. Wonderful, sadenning, work.
xzerinieah chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
Woah. This is good, I really really like the last part.
WordsSpoken chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I like this poem. it says a lot about how teens feel today. So damn much judgment within life and school. People are stupid and never do see what people are and who they are. They don't get to know someone before they actually judge someone. It's sad though. I like this poem
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
This poem was very touching. I loved it. It made very calid points and kept me reading. Keep up the good work! I really liked reading this wonderful work.
Well, T.T.F.N.
Tigger rocks.
EWindheim chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
WHA! That is so sad! Hits close to home since I can relate to a some of what you wrote about. Very nicely done. And thanks for the review of A Dreadful End. I really appricaite it.
pseudocidal chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
That's really beautiful...the last line is so perfect! good job
Winged One1 chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
A friend of mine was a cutter and almost committed suicide, so this comes pretty close to home. *sigh*
It's beautiful. I love the vague ryhming, and the very last line.
(Thanks for the Review, btw!)
~winged one~
Earthsong12 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
This is so good! I love the last line. It’s really sad, but very good. I liked it a lot.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
wow.. very powerful.. nice rhyming.. the end is awesome
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