Reviews for Dream Time
Kira Reen chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
very nice poem, with extremely vivid imagery...your closing lines are...for lack of a better real
Nebulae chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
I liked the 2nd stanza best, with the moon/sun imagery and all, but overall I thought it was a nice piece.
xo-Cheska-ox chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Love it. It's intringuing, and everyone who's put up a review has said what I wanted to say.

PS: Many thanks for your review!
Brightstarr-Bella chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
Hey, nice work! This is an intriguing poem- keep it up.


P.S. Thank you for your reviews on Memory Swing. I have started the sequel, its called "Shards of the Truth" if you care to read it. :D
JRVillers chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
I can hear the moon and the sun chuckling and cracking the sky. You blend everything together quite well here - if I had it printed I could more easily point out where you draw on previous lines. Excellent poem.
marinawings chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
this is a really good poem. the words you use are really good at making me visualize everything. really good. i like it.