|Reviews for Diabolical Alteration|
| Furry Elf chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
*slowly claps in awe* I believe you've captured the change perfectly. I suppose, since you classify it as just 'evil' it doesn't have to be just hate, one could also read it in a supernatural setting for vampires, werewolves, etc.,
| Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
It's well written, but I have to say that I like the style that is yours and only yours. Don't sacrifice what you think and feel and the way you want to put that for the sake of "professional style." You on your own are wonderful; never sacrifice that to seem more admirable or mature.
| EWindheim chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
So dark and so...wow. I'm sorry if that seems so cliche, but I'm feeling sort of numb to it all. Honestly though, I like this.
| RedGlass chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
The first two paragrphs I don't like; they seem too cliche. But the rest of it is perfect. You're painfully descriptive (as always ;)), and you can really get a visual of what you're saying. Very, very nice! :)
| Karasu no sei chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Wow... this is really good...
I like the format and the parts
"For I have forgotten to be
"My eyes change from white to black"
The only thing I have a problem with is in the third paragraph/stanza/woteva (-_-;;)
"all that vital red nourishment" just doesn't seem right... to me anyway. Otherwise a wonderful read.
| freethephoenix chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
That was well written. I like your professional style poems. Have you ever read the poem 'Ping' ? This one reminds me of it. Although the styles are completely different, I just got the same feelings.
Anyway, nice work, keep on being an inspiration to us.
| A Girl in Denial chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Wow, it's almost as if you experienced a heart attack first-hand. The image here is amazingly vivid. Well done!
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
nice job! )
how do you get a pic to show up on your profile?
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
i like it :)
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Wow! That was very powerful and professional-like! :) I loved the metaphor! Great job!