|Reviews for The Love That Shouldn't Have Been|
| Vincenza chapter 3 . 6/30/2004
I like this story. Write more soon.
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
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| Daniels lover chapter 3 . 5/26/2004
cool i like it, interacial couples interest me. please update soon.
| Lissezplait chapter 2 . 5/19/2004
please update,update,update ,update
please*gives sad puppy dog look*
| Eagle Seance chapter 2 . 5/13/2004
oh yuk. the frog bit reminded me of... never mind. Great chapter- continue!
| Kellyilla chapter 2 . 5/8/2004
Wow. This story is really good so far. Can't wait to read more of this! :-)
| Monique chapter 2 . 5/5/2004
Aw!...cute chapter!I can't wait for more. thanks for the update I'm watching this story like a hawk!
| Soumyanee chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Hey, good chapter, although a few mistakes, nothing major, so hope you update soon!
| la chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
| D. Wilder chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
cute. i like the idea behind your story. excellent! update soon and please read my stories.
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
I like interracial romance fics! And this one sounds good. Well written- i hope u continue!
| Monique chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
| DrwMln1 chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
hello, this story is very interesting, i hope you continue with it!... DrwMln1