Reviews for Happiness
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Know the feeling. Great job.
BlaCk-SeOul-FiRE chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
i like this is true for some people,me poem is good._
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Preach on! Cool, well-written poem!
Violet Blues chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
So sad. Very nice.
-Violet
Debbirooni chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Nice peice of work... I really like this one. It shows the extent of people's dreams, as well as show the more dull/sad side of one's life. Good job... I like your personification of the sun, saying that the "morning sun whisks away all my hopes and dreams"...
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Reality... I hate it... But I love love LOVE this poem!
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Wow. This poem so relates to me. I can't tell you how many times I've dreamed that I own the whole mall, or I won the lottery, or the people in this world has all turned really nice, just to wake up and find that it's not real.
Excellent work.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
i love your style: short, sweet, flows, whats not to love about it?
Untame Spirit chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Nice poem. I definitely understand the feeling... Good luck to you.