|Reviews for Happiness|
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Know the feeling. Great job.
| BlaCk-SeOul-FiRE chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
i like this is true for some people,me poem is good._
| IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Preach on! Cool, well-written poem!
| Violet Blues chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
So sad. Very nice.
| Debbirooni chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Nice peice of work... I really like this one. It shows the extent of people's dreams, as well as show the more dull/sad side of one's life. Good job... I like your personification of the sun, saying that the "morning sun whisks away all my hopes and dreams"...
| KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Reality... I hate it... But I love love LOVE this poem!
| Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Wow. This poem so relates to me. I can't tell you how many times I've dreamed that I own the whole mall, or I won the lottery, or the people in this world has all turned really nice, just to wake up and find that it's not real.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
i love your style: short, sweet, flows, whats not to love about it?
| Untame Spirit chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Nice poem. I definitely understand the feeling... Good luck to you.