Reviews for With us or Against us
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
You're so blunt with your work, I quite like it. That's all I can say, you're a wicked writer and you deserve a review for this (but not a very good one from moi! p) Keep on writing mr. genius lol
Jenna xx
*your stalker... 78 percent! LOL*
Lailassi chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Interesting piece. I really like your writing. It's nothing like mine in that it has relevance to actual things that happen in the world, or so it seems to me. If I tried to actually explain what this meant to me, it would be rather a waste of space. Y'know what, I'll just stop here, leaving you with the thought that I really like your poems. This one is good. the rhyming is not in any particular scheme, but it emphasizes a sort of feeling that poem is written for the purpose, not the poetry. The rythm is nice, and I like your choices in vocabulary and phrasing.
Very nice.
AmethystPisces chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Powerful piece. It speaks so much in a short length. I love the last four lines, very true.