Reviews for The Toe Monster
Alareic chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
WOw, this is pretty good. keep it up!
PS. The two nameless men was made to try and create suspense for the reader. As the story progresses, the team of four will find out more about the men and how they framed them. Thanks for the review!
Yrouna chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
I'm scared now! I thought the toe monster only eats toes? now I can't get out of bed in the middle of the night to go to the bathroom! OMG! ok, so i'm overreacting, but I really AM scared. your story is very disturbing ya know...
Dream and Write chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
Well done. Keep up the good storylines. I love the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
IrishVampire13 chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
OMG...very freaky!
Sky of Water chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
That was good, but the names "Jimmy" and "Jenny" were too close. It got kind'a confusing. other than that little mistake, it ws fine.
Alouette chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
great! . funny,too! I love it!
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