Reviews for Only Time
confwuzzled chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
love it! cool haiku! confwuzzled
Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Wrathful Diana chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
I don't really like haiku's, this is well written and in proper format but I don't think haiku's can really speak to the reader. Good job.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
*thinks* thoughtful thats for sure... i dunno if i agree with it though. either way its good and makes ya think ;) nice!
katmonkey chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Good job. Kinda deep and hidden meaning-y.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
I've only written 1 Haiku and don't read many, but this is pretty good.
Keep writing-
Eternal Aeris chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
interesting...are you giving all of us a message here? jus kidding!
vanburen chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
You wrote this in under 16 seconds, so in terms of speed poem writing skill, it is very well done, and has that air of enigma that all haiku have. It's part of their charm. Try taking a longer time to write one. Sit, and marinate in your thoughts for a while. Think of the one thing that means a lot to you, and boil all that emotion down to seventeen syllables. Then you will have a totally kick-ass haiku. The best things in life don't come easy, quick, or cheap, babe.
peace out!
lronMaiden chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
i'm not a fan of haiku...but i swear this is the best one i've ever read! It stays in my mind and i just want to keep reading it... i don't know WHAT it is...but yeh... gosh! hehehe