Reviews for Still Remain
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
aw kinda sad but good.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
aww, nice analogy! in answer to the bowling question, you just got to practice, myine was pure dumb luck. i've been bowling for about 15 years and now i bowl 4 days a week, but that 242 was dumb luck. i've never co-authored a poem, but i'd like to try! thanks for the reviews! 150, i'm so excited!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
I had this one before and thought I already reviewed this...I guess not, anyway, I do like this, esp. since I am a coffee drinker...It's what kept "Honore de Balzac" going...I can relate, the face, the mug... the hot drinks all that has burned that may mark that face...very nice, unique...
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
This is just my opinion... but I think it would make better sense if the word "marks" were changed to "stains"... everything else was great... well done...
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
hopefully there are more marks on your heart than caffine and tea leaf scum ;)
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
I love the comparison...Well done.
Gaxor chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
well it's definitely short. but i'm kinda perplexed as to how they could be in your heart... talk about makin me think!