Reviews for Never Will You Know
bananacreampuff chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
Hey Cas! I love the emotions that flow though the poem... Forbidden love is always great when projected thru poetry... Based on experience? haha! And I agree with who ever said it that you have got great diction! Just when I thought you were simply bumming around the whole summer... ;p "Para siyang iced tea... na tama ang tamis, asim at may ice!"- Raina
morbidrevelation chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Woah. That was really superb! I love your sense of style and your ability to put the right words into your work. You seem to have so much passion- hey man! Don't laugh or nothing! _
Yoko-chii chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Hey there~
Wow, I was expecting those little poems with a lot of rhyming words line after line! I think your poem has evolved to be very mature than your first ones. Great job! Could be printed in a book and no one would hate it! Really. Keep it up!
Dream and Write chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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