Reviews for Broken Wings
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
wow, amazing song! i loved it!
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Very beautifully written I must say that I can understand that angle. Broken Wings are two very powerful words when used properly and you just did!
To-Speak chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
oh god... this is absolutely perfect... **stares in awe** oh wow.. i don't know what to say... just wow!
Snowing Outside chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Wow. Just thought I'd say I read almost all of your poems/songs, and I love them! This might be my favorite one hits close to home. And is written beautifully. Keep up the amazing work!
Something Is Missing chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Oo.. Very good, you make an overused idea (broken wings) to be as if you created those two words.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
I like it... especially the choruses and the ending... great job
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Wow, this is a good song...god song...god song, I really dig this and can so hear this being sung. !
PaulAsaran chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
A good poem, in my humble oppinion. I wish I could say more, but I'm not good at the whole grammar/wording judging thing. Sorry. It is a really good poem, tho.
mercury-phoenix chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
Unfairly perfect, as always. I love wings in poetry, especially broken ones.