Reviews for Lies
SuperNovaNess chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
..ness. ish gewd.
katieryn chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
I like your poem. You seem a lot like me, but thats a generalization. I was recently betrayed, your right to keep it in your notebook and not in the open.
born blue chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
very good...yes describes me very well actually
Last Straw chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
its pretty good, i couldnt get the rhythm going, but it has alot of potential. i especially like the third stanza. nice job.
maybe you would like some of my work?