Reviews for Zerg Rush
Zarancids chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
I found the humor in the story, ain't bad. Although your descriptions are nice, they're over done at times, and your timing is a bit choppy. Would make for a better short story if you toned these factors up a bit.
Aemilia chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Yeah...I'm still not done.
Sometimes Nicholas can get a little too stoic for my taste, and I think his relationship with Nickodamous adds some flavor to his personality.
Psycho Idiot chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
It's cute!
I love Nicholas, too.. more so than David.
R.O chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
I can honestly say that I would never have expected the Zerg to pop up here in that manner-very unique story you have done.
Josee Poesee chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
hahah! So why dosent he like fainting couches?
*~* Dy *~*
Peachez 24 chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
*chuckles* Ah... Nickodamous is such a loveable nut. They're a bit of an odd pair but fun none the less. And it's short and sweet . Keep writing!
Peachez _~
MoonLitDemon chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
That was undeniably great. And cute. I can just picture it happening. Your style of writing makes everything seem very realistic. Excellent.
Happy Hunting,
Innocent Green Eyes chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
hehe Who doesn't get the urge to write an extremely short and completely pointless story? ) THis sounds like something my cousin would write. . (Evil Cranberry) Thanks for the laughs!
God bless,