Reviews for Soon the World will turn over
LovesLostCat chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Very good, fantasic imagery.
BSFlash chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
This is easily one of the only good poems I've read on this site. Your sense of rhythm is impeccable, and the imagery you use is vivid (could be a little more so, but that's just me), but I think it's really the repetition that brings it all together. If I were a writing instructor, this would get an A.