Reviews for Friendship
LiL Angel with Wings chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
This is really good, I can totally relate. Nobody knows the real me, but a couple of my friends think they do, but...its all a lie. They couldn't see me on the inside if they tired... which I don't think they do, all they care about is them...figures.. Oh sorry to ramble on. N-E-Wayz, I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poems and putting me on your favs! Thanks! I hope you read more, and I'll start reading and reviewing yours too! Oh and good job by the way... BTW, I have a new poem that I'm going to be putting up soon called "Regret".
LiL Angel with Wings
Dreamer to Fly
Cougar Draven chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Nice work, B. I'm enjoying reading your new stuff, man.
miss-peake chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
that was a brilliant poem and you got the feelings spot on and I know exactly what you're talking about darling...don't let anyone ever tell u that ur dumb because u certainly are not!
There are a few grammatical errors that u may wanna change or take note of...i'll list em for ya to save u time..:
"yoto?" "cantcan't" "beleivebelieve" lats stanza first line needs a "?"
and the last sentence is it supposed to be:
" so it shows me on rainy days what your friendship hasn't shown"?