Reviews for You've Never Had The Burden
Smallfry chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
See if thats about me that is so unfair! If its not i have ANOTHER idea of who it might be
Dear-Ophelia chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
good work. i can somewhat relate to some of this. you write better than any 13 year old i've ever known! keep writing.
leise chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
This is really good. Very well written. Keep it up! Thanks for the review on mine.
hauntingtheliving chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Wow..I like it alot..I've felt that way before too..good work. Keep up the good writing.
daRkMaxG chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
So very powerful. Beautifully well written. I could definitely relate cuz at times people don't understand what ur going through, but only you and that's when u put all ur emotions into a form of writing: Poetry. Well done.
Alien Vampires chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
o wow...lol my words have all been depleted from my fanfiction stuff...anyway...nice poem i look foreward to reading the rest...
different chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
i relly liked it.i'v never told any one the my secorat that i just want to die in my sleep and im relly imprest i wish i had your talent .none of my friend know and because of this i might just tellthem
bleeding with remorse chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
it's so good! keep it up! oh yeah, luv diz part:
You’ve never felt that pain,
That shreds and tears away my heart.
It’s unbearable; it’s killing me,
It’s piercing at me with its poison dart.
so good! oh yeah, thx 4 al da reviews! luv u! :D
Ruthy chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
wow...verry have a good way of getting your readers emotions to feel what your feeling wile there reading this...