Reviews for Ultimatums
AngelaiR chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
wow, this peom made me think a lot.. I think I need to go to my hany dany... dictionary! on .com and look up a few of these words because I am stupid and have no idea what they mean! lol.. oh btw, Michele likes you're poetry aswell!
Victory dance, I am the first reviewer!
Glass Visage chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Lots of "or"s, lots of choices...appropriate for the title, I suppose. It all seems terribly jaded, and nothing incredibly spectacular about the poem, but I believe you are of the intelligence to create something deeper than the simple "night or day, evil or good" thing. I think you could stick to the whole format and scheme of the poem, but make the lines more profound.