Reviews for Devil's Playground |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha i like this chapie! keep writing, i want to know what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't get me wrong- i REALLY REALLY REALLY ike "welcome to my life...aka hell" or what is it now... "good for another season" but this story is awesome and has more than a little potential. are you ever going to update it? not that i want to make update time for GFAS longer because you'd be working on two stories. but maybe sometime soon? |
![]() ![]() Yay! Once again the lovely plot had picked up. Please update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() Gotta say, I love this story the first time around, and I was annoyed when it was pretty much abandoned. Now it looks like you're gonna start updating again. Yay! I like the new version thus far... :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I started reading this two days ago and was disappointed when I had to stop and then wait to start it up again, but it's very impressive. I like how everything's not going too slowly or too quickly. Awesome. I can't wait to read more, so keep the updates coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahah... nice one: oerfect family, perfect friends... perfect arsehole. Yeah, it's hell trying to revise old stories but frankly I think the original version of "Just A Girl" was CRAP. Lord- I can't believe I even put it up. That was me? I wrote like THAT? Lol... well, I'm trying to expand it now, so the 2nd chapter's in Jae's pov- exchanging povs to flesh out the characters. You're doing well with your revising too, I quite liked this chappie. Ah, the irish accent... I love accents. Heh! Cheers~ eyesofahuntress |
![]() ![]() This is such an awesome story, i love your writing style. When will you update it, i've been waiting forever! |
![]() ![]() oh my god this is probably the best story i have EVER read on fictionpress. but seriusly you HAVE to write more please please PLEASE! theyre SOO perfect for each other! |
![]() ![]() heyy! omg i LUV this story! its ABSOLUTELY amazing because its not rushing into anything and i think that anna and Conner have SO much chemistry! its adorable! rele a great couple! PLEASE add to the story sooner! :( or else im pretty sure im going to die...oh yes my name IS anna lol ciao! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg.. this story is awesome.. probably one of the best I've read.. you have to keep updating please.. I'm eager to see if you'll pu some Anna/Connor romance! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh! I love your story but since you haven't updated for awhile I was debating with myself whether I should leave a review or not but it was so good I had to! Please please update! |
![]() ![]() Hey! i love your poems so i read them all and now im reading your stories. pelase continue this one, its addictive. lol. thanks! -kris |
![]() ![]() ![]() You just love those cliffies don't you? You evil evil evil person. Please update soon! ~*fairy pwincess*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have got to update this soon. It's wicked awesome. I love it. I wonder who the perosn is that said that last line. One of the people she was shipwrecked with or someone else they dont know. Neways, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so like your other stories but when are you going to update this one? |