Reviews for Devil's Playground |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey!Just finished reading it all. Usually I'm not really into stories like these, but but since the main character and I share the same name, I just read it out of boredom.I won't even go into grammar and spelling issues because it's only something that rereading would fix cause they are all simple errors that are hard to 's a good story so far, it's actually interesting. I like it! Update when you can, and I hope to read more! |
![]() ![]() arg dan cliffhanger:( its a really good story all in all, so yeh, its 7 in the morn and i havn't had eny caffine yet, and jus finished reading wut u hav so far in ur story. but i'm guessing the person who finds her is ..Connor? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHA? WHAT HAPPNED? I HATE YOU! YOU LEFT IT AT A BLOODY CLIFFIE! ARGH! omgmogomgomgomgomgomg. this is starting to get scary! aargh! what's your problem? who's that person? i swear...you better get the next update up and running - fast. but onto nicer things. i absolutely freaking love your story. mmhmm. OMG. i just got a whacked out idea. is that person the agent guy? the one who died three months ago? aargh!anyways, back to nice things. i love connor. whee! irish accent! *swoons* my god. is anna lucky, or what? although, it's also kinda...scary. being the only girl with 10 sexually frustrated guys? ouchie. but, yes. i love your story and i love you, though i currently hate you. D and thanks for all the ship terms. mwa! update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i just started reading ur story and its absolutly awesome so yeah update soon cant wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow WOMAN! Updates are supposed to be done *atleast* once a month! lol. *cant say I did that.. eh* But.. this chapter seems like a transition chapter. Not much action. You led up a huge build up last chapter so I was wondering what the heck was hidden in that room.. but it didnt turn out to be all that lol. Cant wait to see a *hint* update :D |
![]() ![]() AH this is such a good story, I'm suprised she's kept her head though...with 9 guys hanging around 24/7 O.o lmao but anyways great story UPDATE! *gets out update whip* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait to find out who is with Anna at the end.. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay i didn't really understand this chapter but just write another one. i haven't decided if i'm gonna murder you yet i depends on whether you get a new chapter out in a week or not. keep writing because even though i am confused you still love me and my reviews. lol hardy har harlove karla |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my frickin god... you know what? i sat here and i read this - all twelve current chapters - in one sitting... this is such an intelligent story! and i must say that i pretty much hate you right now for that cliffhanger. soon! ~frostfae |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! stupid...cliff hanger *glares* darn it all...if only i had your mind i could see where this was going... . now you got me all excited so i read this all in 2 days and now...it stops *sigh* bleh lol good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah! Suspense! Need to find out what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UGH! Not ANOTHER cliffy! WAH! *Sigh* So, apparently I was wrong. Lol. Didn't really think I was right anyways. ;P And what was up with Anna thinking that about Seamus? ISN'T SHE SUPPOSED TO BE WITH CONNOR? Sorry. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, cliffy! Dun dun dun! (Sry for being so short, but I hafta go!) |