Reviews for Devil's Playground |
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![]() ![]() ![]() damn! a cliffie.. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() god, you like cliffies too much. who is it this time? people trying to kill her, or is it time to reintroduce the pusedo agent dude from teh beginning. all in all, great chapter, i kike the water fall part, the island sounds beautiful and thanks for updating. luv hannah banana |
![]() ![]() dude... is it a hobo or somethin'? |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE! ur gonna make me die :::: :'( lol get it up soon pwease lol |
![]() ![]() coolies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() not ANOTHER cliffhanger... UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no you haven't updated in forever and you left me with a clift hanger update dammit an dlet them make uot or somethin g because he is sexually fustrated lol. anywasy the revised chapter ten is good it allows the story to go somewhere. i really like this please update as soon as posible you don't know how much this means to love ya and the story karla |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you hear that? It's the sound of me LONGING for an update. I'm greatly enjoying the story. Good characterization and delectable tension between Anna and Connor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice twist...the island, its a really unexpected nice twist, especially the underground lair. i love it. i hope you update soon...i didn't think you were going to update it anymore...i was starting to lose hope, but now i have faith again. lol. i'll be checking... hunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! a cliffie. now you have to update soon so that we won't kill you. i love the interaction between conner and anna, it's very realistic. update soon. luv hannah banana |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap! Please please please update. And for God's sake put in a kissing or a fluffy moment or something! hehehe. okay buh-bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that was good! i wanna know soon ! write again soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() HURRY UP AND UPDATE! What's the thing in the room? A...synthetic animal? (I dunno...only thing I could think of that would stay alive for that long...)I would be terrified down there. At least Anna has strong and brave Connor to rely on! *cough*sarcasm*cough* Update soon! I'll be holding you to the 'few weeks' thing instead of a whole month or so (I hate when people do that)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, what! NO, Cliff hanger...ugh, you evil author. Keep going, will you already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nO..now i have to wait longer to read wat happens! Great chapter! UPDATE. SOON. PLEASE. |