Reviews for Devil's Playground |
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![]() ![]() UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! i was reading this story ages ago! and then i just found it! yayaya! i love it...anna's my fav. but connor's kewl in his own, perverted *titls head*, way *nods* yeah. so now you're on my favorites so i don't lose this story again! ~forever with dusk! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay...i take it back. This story is awesome! what do u mean u'll update in a few WEEKS? WEEKS? are u crazy? i can't wait that long...especially in a cliff hanger! damn you! please don't do that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! love it soo much so far! The story line is great and suspiscious and your building details greatly! good job and dont stop! |
![]() ![]() Dammit! This is awesome. Where'd you come up with this stuff? Absolutely love the sarcastic love-hate tone/atmosphere between Anna and Connor. Just read the entire thing today by chance because the summary sounded interesting. I'm glad I stumbled upon your story. Please update soon, although you just updated today. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg.. SLACK SLACK SLACK! LoL damn cliffie.. it was a very nice piece.. hope u update soon, inbetween school! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! it's a cliffie! i don't hate you.. but AHH! cliffie! i keep imagining what the cliffie is.. it'd be cool if they all like moved underground.. but i wanna know what was behind that door... like.. a huge .. i dunno. i think it's gunna be big tho. yeah. hehe |
![]() ![]() hey i LUVED it i deleted u ff my authors list cuz i didnt think u would EVER update but u did yay please update sooner next time |
![]() ![]() ![]() *gasp* How DARE you leave a cliffie! Waah...I wanna know...is it a lion? An artificial being? I'd be freaked to DEATH in that cave...freaky. Hm...maybe for WW2? It IS 1942 last time, right? Eh...I'll never figure it out. UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol... loved the ending to this chapter.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey..great stuff.. i'll have to finish later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter Muchos better. Uh...not that the previous one sucked or anything...heehee...*shakes head and runs for it* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i personallylove it and please keep updating and so i promise to review each and every 4 writing, karla |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, well this is certainly getting even more interesting. Love it! Keep up the great work! |