|Reviews for Jaded
| augmentedDREAMS chapter 7 . 3/2/2015
What gives Tyler the right to say that Kiara is being unprofessional? She rejected his ideas because she didn't like them. She has her business to think of. she just can't accept any idea he throws at her just to make him happy. She would've rejected them even if she hadn't already hated him. This is business. You think of your company first. She hasn't been insulting him nor has she let any personal feelings get in like of her WORK. She treat him however she wants outside work. She doesn't want to be friends with him then Tyler should respect that. It was very wrong to show that Kiara was affected by his words because Tyler was just wrong.
| twiinklex chapter 12 . 12/21/2012
Nooooooo pleaseeeeee updateeeeeee
| 4everSmiles chapter 12 . 8/14/2011
I loved it! You're probably not going to be updating this since it has been forever but if you ever do, I'll be waiting to read it :)
| renegade01 chapter 12 . 10/8/2009
i feel like will smith when in one scene from the fresh prince he pretends his hands are a knife and starts making cutting motions in the air and phil asks what are you doing, and he says cutting the tension.
i gues u hav to see it for wat i jst said to make sense.
i like this but u havent updated in soo long... wat gives dude? anywho, u write well. ;)
| MarieAnn chapter 12 . 6/29/2009
I really enjoyed reading this story. Please update soon!
| OnMyWayToGettingLost chapter 12 . 3/24/2009
I like. :-) However, I do have one question. Is Brandon's story about being cheated on true?
| FerretsRevolution chapter 12 . 10/10/2008
I was actually pleasantly surprised when I read this story...I thought it was going to be cliche, and in some ways, it is, but not overly so. I mean, when I opted to read this story, I was hoping the two main protagonists would end up 'happily ever after' in the end...(I hope you don't decide to change that...I'm a sucker for happily ever after...)
I think from the prologue, your writing has greatly improved...I was abit hesitant at first when I read the prologue, but the story has roped me in and kept me interested. Bravo. UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
| naivete chica chapter 5 . 8/19/2008
i tried to like tyler, but i just can't! i think cheating is the lowest most disrespectful thing anyone in a relationship can do. and i think men who live to be 'players' are just sad. i know he's imperfect, and the point of the story is that he matures and changes.. but i don't think people in reality change from one thing to the complete opposite (cheating/player-loving/dedicated). but, i really like the plot idea.. especially the summary.. that sometimes it takes the person who broke your heart to mend it. and i was reading this at 1am in the middle of night so i'm a bit out of it lol.
| SoulSam chapter 12 . 2/5/2008
this fic is so good, i couldn't stop reading it for a minute, i just blew through all 12 chapters and i so hope you update sometime soon. i know it's been a while but i am seriously hooked, would love to read more! this is too amazing a fic to not continue :)
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 12 . 8/8/2007
AWSOME that was SO amazing. PLEASE continue!
| ANGEL992210 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
You are an amazing writer and I look forward to more of your stories.
| Turtle chapter 12 . 5/20/2007
You've got a good story here. Hope you continue it!
| 5starmom chapter 12 . 4/24/2007
I SORRY I didn't stop at every chapter and review I just didn't want to stop reading! I CAN'T wait until the next chapter...I guess I'll have to though.
| wandless chapter 12 . 11/13/2006
| jackie chapter 12 . 7/2/2006
man, i just found this story after forever! i thought you weren't going to update again. anyhow, UPDATE AGAIN! SON