The good thing about co-writing a story like you're doing with your friend: updates are faster!

wow...Tess
very deep
keep it up!
~VS

Please be nice, Emma!
Virginia wants to be your friend!

lolz intrestinglolz. update soon.

Great job guys! Fast updates... I'm impressed_ Their interaction through letters is an interesting idea, and I am looking forward when the two sisters actually meet each other face to face.
So far so good, and keep the updates coming.

i can feel the atmosphere changing... the letter is not so harsh anymore... they seem to be getting kinder towards one another... can't wait to see what's up next... update soon!

I love Virginia! I'm glad you chose to have her be serious this time. It shows that she truly is not just any regular noble that is intrigued with the barbarian ways of the peasents. This was a very good chapter. Keep up the good work!
Sarah

Good chapter. I like the whole argument behind it. The line "Nobles are not a different species just because our blood is bluer" made me laugh because it sounded like if your blood was blue, like really blue, not in the royal sense (well you get it) then you would be a different species. lol... A few sentences were worded a little awkwardly, but mostly a very good chapter. :)

whoa. heck of a story u 2 got going on. it's awsome. update soon! _

whoa. heck of a story u 2 got going on. it's awsome. update soon! _

Wow... this actually a very interesting story! I love how it is simply letters between two sisters (who actually hate each other, but are still insanely polite even in their insults). I also like how you have devoloped each character and so far have kept them the same. It's funny because when I read Virginia's letters I tend to agree with her more genteel writing and curiosity, but when I read Emma's letters I tend to agree with Emma about Virginia's niavete and ignorance. I hope to see an update soon!
Sarah

...and i'm sure emma will become less haughty...sorry...couldn't leave my review with just a remark on virginia :) how could i sleep at night? lol anyway...i'm sure as the story progresses the attitudes of both characters will improve...ahem... forgive me for my unnessecary rambling.

Very nice updates :) I am really liking this story so far :) i'm sure virginia will become less snobby eventually... hopefully :) just a few minor typos here and there... one minor technical suggestion would be to add a comma after Ewen in the sentence "...and in walked Ewen Alaisdair's brother..." just to cut down on confusion... i thought that Ewen Alaisdair was the guys whole name for a minute and then i figured it out... ok. that's all :o) keep up the good work and please update soon!

Wow, awesome first four chapters. The girls both have a very unique voice, well expressed and very much in tune with the times. I have enjoyed theri anecdotes and look forward to more. Keep writing!

I must be the odd one out here, because I actually admire Virginia for her backlash to Emma. She doesn't seem all that shallow to me, the way most others seem to see it, but rather, incredibly naive. Both girls appear to be quite ignorant of the worlds the other grew up in, but at least Virginia appears to be giving a genuine effort towards learning.
The end of each letter by Emma leaves me furious and in need of a good rant, but I consider this a tribute to the great writing going on here. I feel invested in the characters, and near salivating over the future for these two girls.
Please continue and keep up the great work!