Reviews for Conclusion of Time
laerai chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Oh my god, I really loved this! It's my favourite so far! I loved the way you used the ticking visually! And I really loved the structure! Ending strikes me odd, but I love this anyway!
arwen-evenstar89 chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
i like this one too! The Ticking all spread out is cool, but i think it's kind of distracting in a way. Over all, great poem!