Reviews for MerryGoRound
horseflaming chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
Let me count the ways I love this. Too many too count. I LOVE THIS! (I don't know why)
Animagess chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
As much as I disaprove of 'song' poems, this one was chillingly effective. The "1-2-3 GO!"s made it sound a little too much like a Japanese pop song though; although it is technically a 'song', it's unlikely we'll ever actually hear it, which is why this would be more effective in a traditional poem format (i.e. without the chorus).
In all other respects, this is a well-done piece.