Reviews for Cold
midnightdream-5 chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
wow i thought this poem was really good mainly because it was different and i like different! check out my story vampires at war you might like it - i hope!
Adrie chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
E heh heh heh! :P I totally feel my horny side coming out. sexy poem! i don't know why.. maybe the desperation and unfinished sentences? :P lolz!
Makisha Korian chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
That's really sad, but I liked it.
Whispers of the Lost chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Wow. This is amazing! I like this style... it really makes you think. Awesome job!
Shannon chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
if they new you, they would know how very true this is.
-shannon
Deathscythe's sister chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
awesome! i liked how you started and as you went along. great choice of words. i love the ending...those are always the best.
Saiai chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Aw that's so sad. And here I was thinking "Hey, this is going to end happy" and it didn't. I like it that way! Nice choice of words and great emotion as well.