Reviews for Next To Me
sheZadey chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
i like the contrasting again- which you do a lot with your poems. this is just a very powerfull poem and very simplistic. its def. one of my favs.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
*sniff* wow...
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
I miss the one I love all the time...Except when he's next to me...
flyinfrogg chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
wonderful poem, you really have a talent for short poems.
nairraa chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
This expresses the problems in a relationship really well, can imagine this.
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
This is so sweet... simple yet emotional... I like it...
my-vision chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Very cool! It has a distant, icy feel - i can see you mourning for someone, who is right there. "i miss you"... lovely.
finding sanity chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
short n' sweet. hmm havent been on in awhile.. gonna go read sum more. r/r my new poem!
~finding sanity
Celtic Wind chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Very sweet poem. I know exactly what you're expressing. Excellent job and keep up the good work.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I've seen this in relationships, being there physically but mentally and emotinoally the gap is like the grand canyon. Hm, very good.
keep writing-
till-iburnout
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
I like this...feels like two people who are physically near but emotionally distant...sad but you can feel it.