Reviews for In Silence
Silvra Gregorio chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
very nice...pretty sad...but nice...hugs smile and things ill get better hugs, bear
Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 333 chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
Nice, Jake...
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
I like this haiku it kinda creepy but what are you going to do? lol. I read your profile you life is confussing in a couple paragraphs!
lilxseeker chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Good haiku...very dark...
Wrathful Diana chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Better haiku than most (if not all) that I've read.
Eternal Aeris chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
ok...since I haven't reviewed you's a review...this is very good...I like it just as much as your others...*.* XOXOXOX- Lilah
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
wonderful haiku!
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
Nice haiku here. Emotional haiku. Good job.
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
I like the darkness of this... very saddening yet exciting... well done...
Seaspray chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
I liked that. The short words made it feel very subdued, very lonely. It was understated- yet very emotive. I think you are good at this, keep it up!
Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
nice job. )
vanburen chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
It's sad! It makes me feel subdued inside. Nice alliteration
Pixie in a Birdcage chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I posted another story. I t should be up by tomarrow. But One bad thing is that when I posted it FP had to fuck with it and now it looks weird. I like your haiku. It's so... Japanese. Well I'll see you tomarrow Jake.
bye bye stupid head!
PS. "Shit! Shit! Who the fuck is shooting at us?"
"I don't know. Fire mistels!"
"Shit guys. The mistels they are shooting us. Fire our shit!"
"But I am le tired."
"Well then, have a nap. THEN FIRE THE MISTELS!"
"Ah! Motherland!"
lichen chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Breaking Heart chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
hey there!
now,i reallie like this.
i think that it's awesome.
keep it up.
your irish lover
(in the U.S.
o' course)
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