My favorite two lines: "I wish I was too happy to smile,/Too strong to hold on, too discourage to be worthwhile".
Kind of reminds me of T.S. Eliot, know what I mean? The rhyme draped around just the edges of the poem, holding it together, not binding it, just holding it.

It has a lyrical quality...I like how you build up your stanzas to the end.

bloody hell. Thats about all i can say. Positivly amazing