Reviews for The Attic
Atomic Works chapter 23 . 2/8
Cute story and I meant that in a good way.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
This is good! But if you ever get the chance, maybe you could separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones.
:D
anonymus chapter 19 . 6/24/2013
Alriughtm
Alright
calle dmy
called my
feeet
feet
overmy
over my
knew wello enough that I would fo to
wello-well
fo-go
I could only imagine our reunion would be like.
missing word
nai9ls
I'd been unable to any sleep:
missing word between "to" and "any"
anonymus chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
'base camp', it the small area around's Will's truck where a few slayers were discussing tactics could be called such.
it-in
and a missing at the end of the sentence
anonymus chapter 18 . 6/24/2013
climbing the and vanishing
missing wored

Justr because
-Just
anonymus chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
family and I from two vampires
family and me from two vampires
anonymus chapter 12 . 6/24/2013
He leaned back lazily against my best and looked
"best"? was "bed" meant here?

I have to go find Aysel and risk
wrong person "Iden" instead of "Aysel"
anonymus chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
blow to me side.
-blow to my side.
normally I a duel
normally in a duel
anonymus chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
Hell, she doubted if they
she-I
anonymus chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
while in was in the
-while I was in the
anonymus chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
when I person was
i-a
anonymus chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
TYPO
I shoved hi off
hi-him
anonymus chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
hi,
just started reading
(interesting as far as i have read)

i dont know if you want typo correction? (especially since it is already compleated)
but as long as there is no obvious hint that you dont want them ...

TYPO:
"have married have married"
2*"have married"
But then again, he hadn't really been paying attention when he left that evening
third persone -third person (I-he)
Wickedforlife chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Hot scottish guy, two words ; DAVID TENNANT!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/30/2013
It was a rather anticlimactic ending, and I really wish there were more Iden - Aysel moments but...
Great story :) Iden's behavior was so cute! The way he acted around and about things concerning Aysel! Especially how he would call her "miss" and act all old fashioned.
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