Interesting fiction. I wonder if there is a sequel ? But from the tone of the last lines I guess there won't be. Anyway, thanks for your work !

God how much I love Iden Black~ I was expecting see more of him...Fayer is hillarious I like the guy but poor guy i hope he get over with Crush. Darwin he is my fav~ Aysel I love her and Really happy she got sexy Iden jee i want to see some kiss but got nothing haha still love them alot ~ Wes is second fav..love ya all

Wonderful story and very well written! I must say I really liked this a lot and enjoyed all of your characters, even the evil ones. Great work!

I really like Fayer and Aysel together. It's always a very entertaining read when they interact with one another.

Very amusing chapter for some reason! I'm not sure why!

I really do like what I've read so far! I haven't read too many vampire stories on here and it's been awhile since I've actually read a decent in general. The last bit in this chapter made me laugh for some reason...I don't know why. Anyway, great work so far!

Well I've got to agree with Iden. Aysel has really been a bitch I wont lie. Her attitude is horrible. I wish I cold like her but right now she doesn't deserve anyone's respect. I hope she learns that she's in the wrong. I get that things are hard but she should appreciate what Iden's doing for her.

Cute story and I meant that in a good way.

This is good! But if you ever get the chance, maybe you could separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones.
:D

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I could only imagine our reunion would be like.
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I'd been unable to any sleep:
missing word between "to" and "any"

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and a missing at the end of the sentence

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missing wored

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family and I from two vampires
family and me from two vampires

He leaned back lazily against my best and looked
"best"? was "bed" meant here?

I have to go find Aysel and risk
wrong person "Iden" instead of "Aysel"

blow to me side.
-blow to my side.
normally I a duel
normally in a duel