Reviews for The Attic
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 23 . 10/4/2014
Wonderful story and very well written! I must say I really liked this a lot and enjoyed all of your characters, even the evil ones. Great work!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 16 . 9/26/2014
I really like Fayer and Aysel together. It's always a very entertaining read when they interact with one another.
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 7 . 9/17/2014
Very amusing chapter for some reason! I'm not sure why!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
I really do like what I've read so far! I haven't read too many vampire stories on here and it's been awhile since I've actually read a decent in general. The last bit in this chapter made me laugh for some reason...I don't know why. Anyway, great work so far!
Palm-top-tiger chapter 19 . 8/2/2014
Well I've got to agree with Iden. Aysel has really been a bitch I wont lie. Her attitude is horrible. I wish I cold like her but right now she doesn't deserve anyone's respect. I hope she learns that she's in the wrong. I get that things are hard but she should appreciate what Iden's doing for her.
Atomic Works chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Cute story and I meant that in a good way.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
This is good! But if you ever get the chance, maybe you could separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones.
:D
anonymus chapter 19 . 6/24/2013
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I could only imagine our reunion would be like.
missing word
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I'd been unable to any sleep:
missing word between "to" and "any"
anonymus chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
'base camp', it the small area around's Will's truck where a few slayers were discussing tactics could be called such.
it-in
and a missing at the end of the sentence
anonymus chapter 18 . 6/24/2013
climbing the and vanishing
missing wored

Justr because
-Just
anonymus chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
family and I from two vampires
family and me from two vampires
anonymus chapter 12 . 6/24/2013
He leaned back lazily against my best and looked
"best"? was "bed" meant here?

I have to go find Aysel and risk
wrong person "Iden" instead of "Aysel"
anonymus chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
blow to me side.
-blow to my side.
normally I a duel
normally in a duel
anonymus chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
Hell, she doubted if they
she-I
anonymus chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
while in was in the
-while I was in the
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