Reviews for The Attic
Atomic Works chapter 23 . 2/8
Cute story and I meant that in a good way.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
This is good! But if you ever get the chance, maybe you could separate the long paragraphs into shorter ones.
anonymus chapter 19 . 6/24/2013
calle dmy
called my
over my
knew wello enough that I would fo to
I could only imagine our reunion would be like.
missing word
I'd been unable to any sleep:
missing word between "to" and "any"
anonymus chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
'base camp', it the small area around's Will's truck where a few slayers were discussing tactics could be called such.
and a missing at the end of the sentence
anonymus chapter 18 . 6/24/2013
climbing the and vanishing
missing wored

Justr because
anonymus chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
family and I from two vampires
family and me from two vampires
anonymus chapter 12 . 6/24/2013
He leaned back lazily against my best and looked
"best"? was "bed" meant here?

I have to go find Aysel and risk
wrong person "Iden" instead of "Aysel"
anonymus chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
blow to me side.
-blow to my side.
normally I a duel
normally in a duel
anonymus chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
Hell, she doubted if they
anonymus chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
while in was in the
-while I was in the
anonymus chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
when I person was
anonymus chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
I shoved hi off
anonymus chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
just started reading
(interesting as far as i have read)

i dont know if you want typo correction? (especially since it is already compleated)
but as long as there is no obvious hint that you dont want them ...

"have married have married"
2*"have married"
But then again, he hadn't really been paying attention when he left that evening
third persone -third person (I-he)
Wickedforlife chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Hot scottish guy, two words ; DAVID TENNANT!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/30/2013
It was a rather anticlimactic ending, and I really wish there were more Iden - Aysel moments but...
Great story :) Iden's behavior was so cute! The way he acted around and about things concerning Aysel! Especially how he would call her "miss" and act all old fashioned.
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