|Reviews for The Attic|
| Alex Willow chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
it's a brilliant story but it's hard to remember your talking about Scotland with your use of word eg. Pants and Automobile. Try using the english word automobile Car
| Mazarine chapter 23 . 9/27/2012
awesome story xD totally loved it great job
| Seranade chapter 23 . 8/8/2012
Loved it! A job well done! I have never liked vampire stories, but I'm starting to change my mind, thanks to you!
Brilliant story! Don't stop writing!
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 23 . 6/2/2012
Your story was interesting. I like how nobody was perfect; everyone got injured or hurt in some way. It makes the story more realistic.
Keep up the great work!
| MilkyWaySora chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
This story is sounding really good! I love the depth you pout into the characters already. Aysel is awesome!
| ffh chapter 23 . 9/15/2011
this story is absolutly brilliant ! and i who thougth that i was sick of vamp stories.. i was sort of rooting for fayer, but iden was totally my second choice ;) it's 3 am now, so I have to go to bed.. but i'm starting on the sequal followed by the rest of your stories first chance i get !
| jane chapter 15 . 4/5/2011
Aysel is mean, and exactly like the people who bully her. I really dislike her for how she treats Fayer, just because he's nice to her and takes her bullshit doesn't mean she can treat him like crap...
| Silverfurred chapter 23 . 2/6/2011
This was a great story. I loved every minute of it and I was pretty satisfied with the ending. I only have one question: What was her families reaction to her being immortal? And is she okay knowing that she will have to watch all of them die?
| Nymarra chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
excellent piece of writing ;-)
thnx for the music :-p stitches is great
| LolaRoll chapter 15 . 8/14/2010
gotta say, i absolutely LOVE this story. Youve done a great job writing it. Unfortunately when i started reading this story I was also watching Adam Lambert's music video of for your entertainment. Now i keep picturing Iden as Adam Lambert! lmao. it actually kinda reminds me of the vampire club.
| Mags2110 chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
I hate that this story isn't that realistic(as far as fantasy goes), but it's quirky and for some reason, I find myself laughing and enjoying it.
I shall keep reading.
| Candescence chapter 23 . 7/12/2010
Good story. I thought that the ending was kind of rushed though. And, I didn't really get my closure for Fayer. I liked him and I thought Aysel was kind of out of character in this last chapter, near death experience or not. Anyways, congrats on completing thing
| SASE1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
You are a great writer, really, whitch is probably why you got so many reviews, but I am kind of irritated with unrevised work. You did very well on that too, the corrections, but in the first paragragh you mispelled to. You were supposed to spell it TOO. I am sorry if it seems as if I am a twit, but I just read a couple terrible ones and got frusterated. I asume that at least one of your 849 readers caugt that mistake, and I am hopeing you'll fix it. As I have said before, I had just read some terrible ones, so I appoligize if it seems as if I blame you for other peoples idiotcy. I also read about how people ignore flames, or insults, but I am hoping you are one to learn from critics. I sure hope so, because you're work looks intreaging and I refuse to read from self rightous morons. Good work neatherless.
| Luv'nLife101 chapter 23 . 6/22/2010
Good story! I liked it alot!
| ManicMango chapter 23 . 6/9/2010
Hm...I liked the story, but it feels like it ended too fast. The ending just didn't feel right...I dunno...anyways, good story