Reviews for The Attic
Alex Willow chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
it's a brilliant story but it's hard to remember your talking about Scotland with your use of word eg. Pants and Automobile. Try using the english word automobile Car
Pants Trousers
Mazarine chapter 23 . 9/27/2012
awesome story xD totally loved it great job
Seranade chapter 23 . 8/8/2012
Loved it! A job well done! I have never liked vampire stories, but I'm starting to change my mind, thanks to you!
Brilliant story! Don't stop writing!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 23 . 6/2/2012
Your story was interesting. I like how nobody was perfect; everyone got injured or hurt in some way. It makes the story more realistic.

Keep up the great work!

Tarah xXx
MilkyWaySora chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
This story is sounding really good! I love the depth you pout into the characters already. Aysel is awesome!
ffh chapter 23 . 9/15/2011
this story is absolutly brilliant ! and i who thougth that i was sick of vamp stories.. i was sort of rooting for fayer, but iden was totally my second choice ;) it's 3 am now, so I have to go to bed.. but i'm starting on the sequal followed by the rest of your stories first chance i get !
jane chapter 15 . 4/5/2011
Aysel is mean, and exactly like the people who bully her. I really dislike her for how she treats Fayer, just because he's nice to her and takes her bullshit doesn't mean she can treat him like crap...
Silverfurred chapter 23 . 2/6/2011
This was a great story. I loved every minute of it and I was pretty satisfied with the ending. I only have one question: What was her families reaction to her being immortal? And is she okay knowing that she will have to watch all of them die?
Nymarra chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
excellent piece of writing ;-)

thnx for the music :-p stitches is great
LolaRoll chapter 15 . 8/14/2010
gotta say, i absolutely LOVE this story. Youve done a great job writing it. Unfortunately when i started reading this story I was also watching Adam Lambert's music video of for your entertainment. Now i keep picturing Iden as Adam Lambert! lmao. it actually kinda reminds me of the vampire club.
Mags2110 chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
I hate that this story isn't that realistic(as far as fantasy goes), but it's quirky and for some reason, I find myself laughing and enjoying it.

I shall keep reading.
Candescence chapter 23 . 7/12/2010
Good story. I thought that the ending was kind of rushed though. And, I didn't really get my closure for Fayer. I liked him and I thought Aysel was kind of out of character in this last chapter, near death experience or not. Anyways, congrats on completing thing
SASE1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
You are a great writer, really, whitch is probably why you got so many reviews, but I am kind of irritated with unrevised work. You did very well on that too, the corrections, but in the first paragragh you mispelled to. You were supposed to spell it TOO. I am sorry if it seems as if I am a twit, but I just read a couple terrible ones and got frusterated. I asume that at least one of your 849 readers caugt that mistake, and I am hopeing you'll fix it. As I have said before, I had just read some terrible ones, so I appoligize if it seems as if I blame you for other peoples idiotcy. I also read about how people ignore flames, or insults, but I am hoping you are one to learn from critics. I sure hope so, because you're work looks intreaging and I refuse to read from self rightous morons. Good work neatherless.
Luv'nLife101 chapter 23 . 6/22/2010
Good story! I liked it alot!
ManicMango chapter 23 . 6/9/2010
Hm...I liked the story, but it feels like it ended too fast. The ending just didn't feel right...I dunno...anyways, good story
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