Reviews for Response Poem to: Even If I'm Blind
EvilNeko13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
And again, beautifully writen. Lovely and has a mysterious feel to it. Keep it up.
EvilNeko13
Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
Beautifully written (places it on favorites list), reminds me of a haiku I wrote, "Heaven on Earth". Hey, I want to see the original!
TickleMeElmo217 chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
this is cute! i think its basically what everyone eventually wants from life...someone who sees them for them and not their faults. good job!
*ticklemeelmo*
FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
I really like this poem. It's interesting to think that sometimes we see things people never can. Your very talented. Always keep writing.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
heh, cute. i like it. sweet simple and in your face at the same time.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
very beautiful! amazing how some people don't see the faults that are so obvious to you, isn't it? well, great poem!
Tatsu-Dreamer chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Very nice, and very true. Love is blind. You conveyed a lot of conflicing images with so little words, yet it didn't become choppy like most do. Very good job.
flyinfrogg chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
hard hit, that last line.
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
Well... at least he loves you for what you are inside... nicely done this poem...
Krazy Kanook chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
I know i haven't reviewed in a while but I simply LOVE this response to even if I'm blind. I wasn't sure it could get any better but it has. I can't say more except to say that this really touched me and I just had to tell you. Keep up the good work
KK
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I like this. I love Even If I'm Blind
and this reponse poem to it is perfect.
keep writing-
till-iburnout
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Beautiful...very romantic. You have a lucky girlfriend.