Reviews for I'm No Better
Young King101 chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Tite poem there doc, it's true, when Christ said be ye perfect as my Father in heaven is perfect, He didn't mean ba holy-roler, he simply meant be who you are in God. Nice rhythem too!

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Lady Lemmy chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
No one thought you were better than anyone else, don't worry. -eyeroll-
PoetryFictionGirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
A quite thought-provoking piece of poetry. I loved it simply because it is spiritual and it makes sense, even if I have Christ in my life, it's hard to be completely pure and not sin against him.
I understand this poem completely. You write well! Keep it up!
Frank Spade chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
So humble and Christ-like. I love it! Congratulations on a wonderful poem! Dosvidoniya! 8
theoneyouknow chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
totally cool! its good to know that not all christians are arrogant about their faith like those i meet everyday! MUCH LOVE
Edraith chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
Very true, I can say the same of myself, and I like the way you're dealing with a rather common misconception here. The repetitions work well, they highlight the things you write in the other lines and drive the point really home. Nice poem.
I'm Sorry chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I like this, good poem :)