|Reviews for These Stars|
| DrunkenMonkeyKing chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
Not bad at all, but for some reason I don't like it as much as your other ones. Hmm... can't quite put my finger on it though. Sorry, wish I could be more helpful with this poem.
| i was a postcard chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Don't take this an insult, cause I really don't mean it like one, but this reminds me of something I'd read in a greeting card. I know, I know, the two dreaded words! But I mean, this has...soul. It's the only word to describe it. Soul. Yeah, you know...heart...I'm just sticking random words together here...
And I like the mental image that was painted. I actually saw, in my mind's eye, stars and a constellation and stuff...I think that was my favorite part.