Reviews for Wasted Days
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
Great job. I love "Wasting hours and days" thing. it really brings out your meaning. again, great job.
DrunkenMonkeyKing chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
I liked the start, but the rhythym felt slighty off. Very nice repetition at the end, especially with the question at the finish. Some very good rhyme in here too.

Over all opinion?

Kick ass and I wish I could actually hear you sing it as a song.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Ah, it's that last line that hits the hardest. That unanswered question. This poem is very angsty, isn't it? And "stab these eyes" out hit me too. Well, cause I imagined that would hurt...um, now I'm just sounding...strange...like always...anywho, I LIKED the angst very much so. D I hope you don't mind my horrible reviews...I can never seem to convey with words how much I like something, hence I'm a bad reviewer. /