Reviews for The One Below
Mirabella chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Sad and vivid, very emotive. :)

Love the star imagery.
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
He’s drowning in the blood now, but he won’t come up for air

- love that line: the content, the pace, everything ]

For who is ever righteous, except for he who tears apart?

- and that line is so perfect! It just made the whole poem for me.

Love this whole poem! Amazing ]
Trish J chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
That is absolutely one of the most amazing, heart-wrenching poems I have ever read. And I mean ever.
CraigAPrice chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
This is a very well done poem, I really enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work!
Grape chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
This was really deep. Very good too! I like how you added all the objects sorrows into it. It is a really great poem!
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Wow, that was some powerful imagery given in this piece. That's seriously great talent! I espicially like the ending, though it was a depressing and everything. ( But, that's what makes this poem wonderful! _ Thanks for a splendid read!

loserz. ;)
PirateGrrl chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
I read one of your witty reviews to one un-named "writer" and decided to check out your work. You weren't kidding. You are amazing. This poem, well... more than just a poem, spoke to my heart. Well done. The imagery is perfect. You have great talent.
E.B. Keane-Farrell chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
I really loved that poem. I'm serious. It had lots of great describing and personification in the beginning. I loved this so much that it's going on my favorite stories list. I'm serious!
Delete Name chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
WOW. Imagery good, structure fair, scheming fair, passion good, meaning great.
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I love it! It's official. .