favorite verse: I laughed at the clinging snow

I screamed at the hurtful rain

I grasped the falling books

but I was too late

i actually really like that verse. and the 'i can't leave you alone...' etc. some of the imagery didn't work for me, but those two verses really did. and i didn't get the ending 'ie ie ie...' b-i-n-g-o, perhaps? :)

Do you like art?
this poem was Very colorful

it's so nice... you just made a very nice poem... aww... i like this one...

It was pretty and very peaceful. I felt soothed afterwards. :)

Wow, it's beautifully done. I enjoyed reading this.